Vis-à-vis – A Flash Fiction (140 words)

After a tiring day at work, I rewarded myself with a doggy-bag of Jambalaya from Gumbo. I took a jeepney ride home.

A lady sporting a seductive fragrance sat next to me. Her curves were noticeable through her black shirt. I saw her placed her left hand to her inner thigh; her fingers caressed her jeans. Her right hand was on the handrail, then she slowly placed it on top of her right thigh. Our forearms touched.

I felt the electricity on my skin! My blood started to engorge my veins; my breathing tightened…

The jeepney stopped. For a second, we were Vis-à-vis. I almost drowned in her eyes. Her lips were so full; I tasted strawberries in my tongue.

She moved quickly, but out lips did not meet. She left with my dinner, then my stomach started to growl.

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7 Responses to Vis-à-vis – A Flash Fiction (140 words)

  1. reyjr says:

    wow. unti unti na talagang nagiging pron bolg ito a. hehe!

    What’s for dinner doc? lol.

  2. zorlone says:

    No dinner, I got home empty handed.

  3. jan geronimo says:

    Ah, one of those times when a moment seems like an eternity. Too brief to matter, to fragile to make a difference and yet for it’s puny flash it leaves a bumpy scar on your memory.

    I beg to disagree. This ain’t porn. “,)

  4. zorlone says:

    Not only in my memory, but the scar in my stomach grew wider.


  5. bloggista says:

    Ohhhh, I could have lent a hand—ful. 🙂

  6. yatot says:

    tsssttt… hot! but sad… tsk tsk tsk… anyway.. i love eating at gumbo!

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