Don’t look

pcture courtes of deyedoctor
pcture courtesy of deyedoctor


A crack in an unmindful wall,
urging to look inside.
Shadows dancing in a poorly lit room,
caressing my present desire.

Naked voices of pleasure,
moaned with every touch.
Bare breasts of virgin bodies,
tease this temptation and lust.

Tension grew from this body,
as a climactic scene unfolded.
Lips spread from emotions,
seen through the peephole – denuded.

As the excitement was fulfilled,
from a sinful taste of seduction.
Guilt feelings penetrated the skin,
this peeping tom’s illusions.

7 Responses to Don’t look

  1. reyjr says:

    magka kuliti ka nyan…

  2. zorlone says:


    Refer to your post for treatment. πŸ˜‰


  3. jangeronimo says:

    What’s this – a peeping tom’s desiderata? πŸ™‚

    Never mind, I like the poem – totally shows you in a different light. Ahehehe. Kidding! I really like it. And the picture that goes with this poem – love it too. πŸ™‚

  4. zorlone says:


    In a different light or shade? hehehe. Yeah! This is just a way of expressing some of the other humanly desires we have.



  5. jangeronimo says:

    Both, Doc Z. πŸ™‚

  6. yatot says:

    arousing… indeed! lols! πŸ˜€ hahhahha… i think i wet my pants! wahahhaha.. kidding… lovely poem.. very artistic and arousing… hahhaha

    • zorlone says:

      @yatot Ah… you probably spilled water on your pants that’s why it got wet, huh?

      Thank you for the wet comment!


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